When I copy-pasted Ernest Hemingway’s 7 Tips for Writing into a Word document, ProWriter’s Aid, an AI tool I’d installed, underlined several sentences, especially the words he spoke!
Yikes! What’s a novice to do? Who to believe: a prose master human or a computer-generated fixer of prose? While Hemingway isn’t my favorite writer historically – I’m more of an F. Scott Fitzgerald fan – I think it’s wise to know and ponder his rules, so I’ll list them. I like to think I’ve evolved enough as a writer to make my own choices. What about you?
1: To get started, write one true sentence.
“Sometimes when I was starting a new story and I could not get it going, I would sit in front of the fire and squeeze the peel of the little oranges into the edge of the flame and watch the sputter of blue that they made. I would stand and look out over the roofs of Paris and think, ‘Do not worry. You have always written before and you will write now.’”
2: Always stop for the day while you still know what will happen next.
“The best way is always to stop when you are going good and when you know what will happen next. If you do that every day when you are writing a novel you will never be stuck.”
3: Never think about the story when you’re not working.
“I had learned already never to empty the well of my writing, but always to stop when there was still something there in the deep part of the well, and let it refill at night from the springs that fed it.”
4: When it’s time to work again, always start by reading what you’ve written so far.
“When it gets so long that you can’t do this every day read back two or three chapters each day; then each week read it all from the start.”
5: Don’t describe an emotion—make it.
“In writing for a newspaper you told what happened and, with one trick and another, you communicated the emotion aided by the element of timeliness which gives a certain emotion to any account of something that has happened on that day; but the real thing, the sequence of motion and fact which made the emotion and which would be as valid in a year or in ten years or, with luck and if you stated it purely enough, always, was beyond me…”
6: Use a pencil.
“If you write with a pencil you get three different sights at it to see if the reader is getting what you want him to. First when you read it over; then when it is typed you get another chance to improve it, and again in the proof.”
7: Be Brief.
Not a fan either but he was far wiser than any AI.
I wonder if his writing was fodder for the popular AI writing tools – what a back-handed compliment!
Some of these are great tips, like stopping for the day when you know what will happen next and starting by reading what you wrote. Sorry, I can’t not think of my writing when I’m not working on it. Sometimes it’s a good way to solve problems.
When I’m into a story, its characters often appear in my dreams. In fact, I hope to mine my dreams for what’s next!
I can’t imagine emptying my head of story thoughts… maybe that’s why he drank: to not think of his writing!
I’m taking the “Be Brief” suggestion to heart. That I can do. Thanks, PJ. I enjoy Hemmingway’s stories.
I do enjoy his stories, but I can’t write that spare. I seldom know the ‘one true sentence,’ either. He had skills.
Hmmm, I am a fan of Hemmingway. But I am not Hemmingway and don’t try to write like he did. I like your suggestions, PJ. With one exception. As long as the inspirations flow and the video plays, I work. Blessings
Yes! “Go with the flow” works for me.
Blessings back to you, Feather.